Author's Comments:

Zoldyck, 12 Jul 2006

Heh. The perspective in the top panel annoys me a little bit but other than that I think the art turned out okay for this page. It's not as good as I would like it, but it never is, is it? x3

Sorry for my lousy Kaito art. I tried. I really did. But I can't ever seem to get him right. As for the scars, I referenced their positions on his face from the manga, but since I didn't want to over-shadow his expressions I cut the number of scars down. It's been a while since he was used as a punching bag, so let's just say most of them have healed. ^^

All that I'm trying to convey in this part is that Gon really doesn't want Kaito to leave yet. I hope I got the point across without making the kid too emotional. Originally, I had him crying, but I decided against it. Gon is a boy after all, no matter how compassionate he is.

Well, anyway, the fifth page. Enjoy.

User's Comments:

mindnumbingfreaks, 12 Jul 2006

Alright. I have read this. And I love it. But I have to ask - as he is my favorite <3 - ...is Hisoka... ever going to be in it. Because... he should be.

All the same, it's great and totally out-shines anything I could do and I am faving it.

Zoldyck, 12 Jul 2006

Heheh. Thanks for the fav. <3 And, yes, he most certainly is. Hunter x Hunter just wouldn't be Hunter x Hunter without him and his luffable pervertedness. x3

Leorio and Kurapika are going to join in eventually as well. But seeing as the exposition for all this is way too long, it may be a while. ^^;

flynfreako, 12 Jul 2006

pretty good comic! i've faved it :D

Nikicus, 12 Jul 2006

The first panel looks really cool for some reason, actually o.o

Zoldyck, 14 Jul 2006

Really? Heheh. Thanks, you guys. ^^

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